Walking in the Rain

Take a long walk in the pouring rain,
let your hair spill freely down your back
and smell all life that's flowing in your veins
awaken in the storming sky's attack.

Hold out your hands for those tiny kisses
to lick and cool the heartache--and you smile,
splashing past the windshield-wipered masses
stuck in traffic--makes it all worthwhile.

Look between the clouds as sunlight rainbows
sparkling color in each falling drop.
Amid new puddles children freely frolick,
until their mothers scream for them to stop.

Close your eyes and let the chilled breeze blush you--
just catch the taste of wet sky on your tongue.
no matter if your clothes are soaked right through,
they'll dry out as you walk back in the sun.

Written by Eliza Jane Farley Gomez
February 21, 2012

Comments

  1. UnknownFebruary 23, 2012 at 10:38 AM

    oh sweetie....that was lovely. It truly was. You are such a gifted woman.

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  2. Eliza Jane Farley GomezFebruary 27, 2012 at 9:05 AM

    Pammers, thanks so much!!! Backatcha :) Hugs!!! :)

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  3. AnonymousJanuary 10, 2013 at 11:13 AM

    I fe ltd like I was in that rain while reading that...

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